寫作思路及要點：圍繞網上購物，舉出網上購物的利與弊，最後總結自己的想法。
Nowadays, online shopping has become one of the most popular ways of shopping. Going out shopping has become a kind of leisure walk.
如今，網購已經成為人們的.熱門購物方式之壹，出門購物已經成為壹種休閑時的散步。
There are many advantages of online shopping. It can "go shopping" at home, ordering is not limited by time and place.
網購的優點有很多。它可以在家“逛商店”，訂貨不受時間、地點的限制。
It gets a lot of commodity information and can buy goods that are not available locally. It can save time and effort from ordering, buying goods to goods door-to-door without visiting the scene.
它獲得較大量的商品信息，可以買到當地沒有的商品。它從訂貨、買貨到貨物上門無需親臨現場，既省時又省力。
To sum up, it can be seen that online shopping breaks through the barriers of traditional business, and has great attraction and influence on consumers, enterprises and the market. In the new economic era, it is undoubtedly an ideal mode to achieve "multi win" effect.
綜上可以看出，網上購物突破了傳統商務的障礙，無論對消費者、企業還是市場都有著巨大的吸引力和影響力，在新經濟時期無疑是達到“多贏”效果的理想模式。
However, online shopping has many disadvantages. Online shopping can only be seen photos, to the goods really arrive in the hand, will feel different from the physical, which is not as good as in the mall to buy at ease. Network payment is not secure, may be peeping, password stolen.
但是，網購還有許多缺點。網購只能是看到照片，到貨物真的到達手裏，會感覺和實物有不壹樣，這就不如在商場裏買到的放心。網絡支付不安全，可能被偷窺，密碼被盜。
And the delivery is too slow. Although the speed of EMS is faster than that of the past, buyers still have to wait for a few days. Online shopping also can't experience the leisure of shopping and chatting with relatives and friends.
而且收貨太慢，盡管現在EMS的速度已經比以前的郵寄快了不知多少倍，畢竟買家還是要等上幾天。網購也不能和親戚朋友壹起體會逛街閑聊的悠閑。
I don't think online shopping is better than shopping. We should reduce or strengthen the security of online shopping.
我認為網購不比逛街好，應該減少網購或加強網購的安全性。