Manchester United Football Club was founded in 1878. Up till today, this club has a 131-year history. Because of the style of the Manchester United is full of strength and invasiveness, and as the reason of that the mambers like to wear red shirts in match, people intitled an vivid nickname for the Manchester United - "Red Devils".
Manchester United have a large and modern soccer stadium - "Old Trafford". Every week, 76,000 "Red Devils" fans will flock here from all over the world to watch the performences of the "Manchester United ".
Manchester United is one of the most successful soccer club in the United Kingdom even the world. They won 10 times champions in the "English Premier League", 11 times in "FA Cup", 17 times in "Community Shield", 3 times in "European Champions League", and one time in "World Club Cup". Manchester United is the most popular club in Asian too, they have more than 300 million fans In Japan, South Korea and China. Especially in South Korea, 85% peoples are the fans of the "Red Devils ".
Why the Manchester United fans is sought fanatically from the fans? Besides of their numerous honours of championship, there is a very important reason is that they held many world-class superstars. Now,I will have the honor to introduce several stars who were famous in the history of the Manchester United.
簡釋：
“a 131-year history” 前面如果用不定冠詞a 後面必須是131-year，而不是131 years。
invasiveness 侵略性 名詞，invade 是動詞。
to watch the performences 這裏用performece（表演）比game 或者 match 更生動。
seek （sought） 追捧。
這裏的“除了”不能用“except”，必須用“besides”。前者是“除外，除去”的意思，後者是“除了以外還有什麽”的意思，中國人常常搞錯。
加上“have the honor”榮幸地（介紹），以加重語氣。