2.建議把題目改為The reasons why I choose english as my major
3.At the first choose English as my major because it's my private interest;
At the secong,choose English as my major is my character;Choose English as my major is my private living
這三句想法是好的，但錯誤很多，（at first 不加the ，privite interest 是個人利益的意思，等等）幫妳改壹下這三句話。
壹.At first english is my favourite subject in which I have a great interest.
二.I am gifted for english.
三.English is very useful in daily life.
4.希望按照著我的建議和給出的標題再從寫壹下。
建議妳壹上來不要使用比較復雜的復合句，最好使用單句或簡單的並列句。而且只要把意思表達清楚到位就行，不要太過復雜，因為現在妳還無法駕馭，要壹步壹步來。