I really begin to learn drawing and painting when i was at primary school,with my bedroom filled with my works.
Usually i take part in painting competition organised by the school.
I got the first prize of drawing for children when at grade four with my work ,which was the beautiful park in summer.
Besides i have been drawing some cartoon logos in a notebook ,books or on socks.Sometimes i will go to look at some paintings.
I am looking forward to studying different types of painting in the future while i am free.
說實話，妳的作文有幾個地方顯示出很大的語法知識漏洞，如“ Primary school when the real drawings and paintings”“four in primary schools grade group was the first prize drawing for children”
尤其是這句“Sometimes look at some paintings”掉了主語，可能妳打的時候掉了。這句“ I remember I was painting the park in summer”時態用錯了，was/were doing這是說在過去的某個時候某個動作壹直在進行。我覺得不用把這句寫的很詳細，主要突出的是“我畫的是夏天的公園”就可以了。
我改後的作文，按照妳的要求保留原意，壹些地方的詞也是用的妳的原詞。
因為我寫的可能部分詞妳們沒涉及到，就保留了原文。
另外壹些有特色的句式也加了幾個，如“I am looking forward to ”“with my bedroom filled with my works”（這句是個with的伴隨狀語從句，不知妳們涉及到沒）
就這些了，建議妳看壹下語法知識吧。