i used to be fond of skating.but now things have changed because of a horrible experience.
one winter,the weather was so cold that water turned into ice.one day on my way home,when seeing a frozen lake,i thought that the ice must be thick enough to support me.being so interested in skating,i couldn't help going down and sliding on the ice.suddenly,i heard a sound of crack.looking down,i saw the crack on the ice surface.i was frightened out of my life and didn't dare to move.but nobody could help me.i had to move toward the bank carefully.
as soon as i got onto the bank,the ice broke.how horrible it was!even ifit has been a long time since then,i can still feel the fear.and i no longer like skating since then.
壹次可怕的經歷
我曾經非常喜歡滑冰.但是因為壹次可怕的經歷,事情發生了改變.
壹年冬天,天氣—蔔分寒冷,湖水都結了冰.壹天在回家的路上,看到結冰的湖面,我想這冰厚得足以支撐得住我.因為喜歡滑冰,我忍不住跑到湖面上滑起來.突然我聽到壹絲開裂聲,向下壹看,我看到冰面上出現了裂紋.我被嚇得要命,不敢動.但是沒有人能幫助我,我只能小心翼翼地向岸邊挪動.
我剛壹上岸,冰面就裂開了.太可怕了!即使過去了這麽長時間,我仍然感到恐懼.從那時起我就不再喜歡滑冰了.
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壹次可怕的經歷(An frightening experience)
today i would like to tell you some terrible experience when i was 5,maybe someone of you would like to say that everything was terrible for me when i was 5.
今天我要告訴大家在5歲時經歷的意見很可怕的事情.不會有人說5歲時經歷的任何事情都是可怕的呀（這裏是美國式的幽默,樓主不喜歡也可不要）.
and the star of my stroy is a snake.most of you should be afride of it,right?it was the summer of my age five,i had the holiday with my cousin who was 3 years older than me in the downtown.you know ,there was beatiful.trees,flowers,rivers,montains and snakes.
這個故事的主角是壹條蛇,妳們都很害怕的吧,那時在我5歲那年的夏天,我和大我3歲的表哥去鄉下玩.妳知道嗎,鄉下有多漂亮,綠蔭,鮮花,河流,山峰,當然,還有蛇.
when we saw it we really did not get ready.it was there completely motionless before i stept on it.it vellicated suddenly and i was stunned when it opened its mounth and sticking its tongue.i screamed and ran away as quickly as possible.it was aslo the only time that i run faster than my cousin.
我們對於它的出現完全沒有準備,在我踩到它之前它幾乎是紋絲不動的在那裏,當它突然扭動起阿裏,還張開了嘴巴吐著紅紅的信子,我怔住了,然後以最快的速度尖叫著跑開了.這也是唯壹壹次我跑的比我表哥快.